There was this girl. She would tell the whole world her life story, but there was still a sadness and loneliness behind her big brown eyes. We were dating for a small period of time, and got very close. One day, out of no where, she ended it.
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Dennis Field
I really like this. i’m excited to hear others.
June 05, 2013
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