Another demo we wrote with Peter D. Smith which he recorded in his home studio. At this point it is just a nice tune between genres which we will probably give more edge when we record it.
https://soundcloud.com/user-401367084/killed-the-analog-man
I will be very happy to receive feedback. TIA
Many thanks, Bob.
My co-writer Pete is very good—I really like his tune and the way he played and recorded everything. It is still just a demo, though, so it needs a lot, and that includes real drums recorded and mixed well.
Very much appreciate your feedback.
July 14, 2020
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What a smart song, has an unique ethereal sound and great lyrics. I really dig it.
July 16, 2020
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Many thanks, Thomas! Appreciate it… still no likes?! Will check you out.
July 16, 2020
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Thanks, Peter.
You have reminded me that I recorded another version of it and should post it for feedback. J
June 14, 2021
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Killed the Analog Man
I’m into this too deep. I can’t forget the pain.
Killed the analog man, he drove a single lane.
Song inside my head is up and down and fades.
I try to pour more into it to bring another shade.
Chorus
If I run out of here and I soon disappear,
Oh, but where the hell will I go?
Some suspend reality and live inside their dreams.
As if the truth don’t matter, reality’s too clean.
Nothing’s what it seems, yeah, I know too well.
For friends and foes alike the past I will not sell.
Chorus
If I run out of here and I soon disappear,
Oh, but where the hell will I go?
Jackson Lucas ©2020
jjacksonlucas@yahoo.com
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Nice relaxed vibe, sounds like it would fit in a lot of TV shows.
I assume you like the vocals mixed in the background, seems to be your style.
If you do another mix, maybe just me, but I’d pull the drums down a bit.
Overall, nice job, very professional sounding.
July 14, 2020
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Many thanks, Bob.
My co-writer Pete is very good—I really like his tune and the way he played and recorded everything. It is still just a demo, though, so it needs a lot, and that includes real drums recorded and mixed well.
Very much appreciate your feedback.
July 14, 2020
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What a smart song, has an unique ethereal sound and great lyrics. I really dig it.
July 16, 2020
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Many thanks, Thomas! Appreciate it… still no likes?! Will check you out.
July 16, 2020
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Thanks, Peter.
You have reminded me that I recorded another version of it and should post it for feedback. J
June 14, 2021
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robert wronkiewicz
Nice relaxed vibe, sounds like it would fit in a lot of TV shows.
I assume you like the vocals mixed in the background, seems to be your style.
If you do another mix, maybe just me, but I’d pull the drums down a bit.
Overall, nice job, very professional sounding.
July 14, 2020
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