The song is about a boy who is trying to figure out what went wrong with his girl and his heart is heavy but this is all in a high energy rock feel.
I really want to take this some to demo level but would love to hear peoples views on what they feel it needs more or less of, any opinion is appreciated.
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MY WASTED HEART
It was the 2nd time, I bet you've remember,
Everything seemed a little bit strange,
I recall that you admitted nothing,
Getting on with life treating me the same,
Well, I believe that something just changed you,
You came along, but you were never there,
I tried to state that I could forgive you,
But something tells me you don't care,
My wasted heart,
It is still beating for you,
My wasted heart,
Doesn't know what to do,
I'm still waiting for you to say something,
I'm standing like a statue, stone jaw to the floor,
Should have known better, should have realised sooner,
Where the hell is the point I can't take any more,
My wasted,
My wasted,
My wasted heart,
Everyone is telling me to walk away,
I can't do that while my heads in a fight,
Inside I know who the winner will be,
maybe one more day will make it right,
I feel so stupid as I know you won't admit it,
My heart is locked up in a cage you belong,
You've been running around like a wild animal,
I don't understand how you cant see it's wrong,
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