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Crossing over from that friend zone...Produced by Pearl Snap Studios, Nashville
Thank you for your feedback, Greyson! Maybe I’ll go for a fully produced version! Keep creating! Alexsi
October 25, 2020
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KISS YA FIRST
V1
Oh hey there, you again, you follow me around
Didn’t like ya much in high school, but I sure like you now
And I know it wasn’t easy, breakin’ up with her
That story you told me, I remember every word
It’s like when you start talkin’, I lose myself in you
Maybe you don’t see it, maybe you do…
CHORUS
Can I kiss ya, baby? Can I kiss ya first?
Can’t wait another second, I’m all…yours
You won’t know what hit ya, it’s a good kinda hurt
Tell me, boy, can I kiss ya first? Can I kiss ya first?
V2
We’ve been friends forever, what if you don’t feel the same
I don’t wanna mess this up, there’s no stoppin' this train
I’m fallin’, you’re smilin’, nah, you don’t seem to mind
Should we call it a night now, or should we cross that line
It’s like when you start talkin’, I lose myself in you
Maybe you don’t see it, maybe you do…
REPEAT CHORUS
Road trips, concert tickets, late nights at the lake
It’s like we’ve been together all along…
Your eyes say I’m right; I’m comin’ in strong…
REPEAT CHORUS
Closer and closer, over and over...
(Produced by Pearl Snap Studios, Nashville)
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instantly hooked from the first line! great job on setting the tone for the song with the first thing we hear and u do a great job of keeping the listeners attention. I think it’s a pretty killer topic to write on that almost everyone can relate to. Id do some bigger production, bring on the drums!!! I’d love to hear this one fully produced!
October 25, 2020
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Thank you for your feedback, Greyson! Maybe I’ll go for a fully produced version! Keep creating! Alexsi
October 25, 2020
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greyson campbell
instantly hooked from the first line! great job on setting the tone for the song with the first thing we hear and u do a great job of keeping the listeners attention. I think it’s a pretty killer topic to write on that almost everyone can relate to. Id do some bigger production, bring on the drums!!! I’d love to hear this one fully produced!
October 25, 2020
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