Joined: November 25, 2020
Naomi Likes: 8 Songs
Vocals, basic guitar,
London Grammar, Chet Faker, aka Nick Murphy, Audioslave, Sara Bareilles, Joseph Arthur, Counting Crows, Sia
Naomi Elliott gave feedback on Stranger to Pain
Great Groove & Vibe going on with this song. Delivery is spot on!
Naomi Elliott gave feedback on Tinder Love
Hi Matthew, I like your melody in your verse and chorus. Just a thought - your song may not need all the pre-chorus, as well as, three verses and a bridge. Glad you meet someone on Tinder!!!
Naomi Elliott gave feedback on Never More Beautiful To Me
i appreciate your commenting on my comment. Interesting that the publisher wanted it “her” to be confined to just her jeans and t-shirt. Ha Ha Let me know when you sign! Congratulations !!!
Naomi Elliott gave feedback on Should have been me
Hi Paul, Have you played around with the order of the verses? I wonder if v2 would be a stronger opening with the first sentence talking about settling…which as I hear and read the lyrics sets the tone for the “friend” left watching on the side. And perhaps moving... Read More