Joined: November 25, 2020
Naomi Likes: 8 Songs
Naomi Elliott gave feedback on Never More Beautiful To Me
Like the title “hook”-but I wonder if the t-shirt/torn jeans description is overused? I would love to know more about what draws you to conclude this woman was never more beautiful to you- something about her as well as her t-shirt & jeans?
Naomi Elliott gave feedback on Slow Dance
What if you changed up the chorus tempo/melody so there it is contrast to the verses? And, perhaps include some space in your song with rests- or a 4 bar instrumental using your melody motif? Just my thoughts