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Naomi Elliott

November 29, 2020

Naomi Elliott gave feedback on Slow Dance

What if you changed up the chorus tempo/melody so there it is contrast to the verses? And, perhaps include some space in your song with rests- or a 4 bar instrumental using your melody motif? Just my thoughts

November 29, 2020

Naomi Elliott gave feedback on Never More Beautiful To Me

Like the title “hook”-but I wonder if the t-shirt/torn jeans description is overused? I would love to know more about what draws you to conclude this woman was never more beautiful to you- something about her as well as her t-shirt & jeans?

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