Joined: November 18, 2013
Matt Likes: 37 Songs
Matt Rees gave feedback on Spirits
I like the style, theme, and melody, though like Dennis said, it needs more interesting changes thrown in. If you haven’t made any lyric changes yet, I have some suggestions (trying my best to keep your singing meter): 1st verse = great 2nd verse: While you were cleansing your spirit,... Read More
Matt Rees gave feedback on Get Her Out
Thanks! I really like the new version - enough to definitely want to play around with it some more. What was cool was just the idea of learning a song that was recently birthed.
Matt Rees gave feedback on Shipwreck
Brilliant revision. You did focus the topic well. Better title too. But I’d say you have a great bridge in “I’ve sailed too many nights.” Just record yourself pounding through the song for about 10 minutes with no inhibitions, letting your voice sail where it may, then listen back... Read More
Matt Rees gave feedback on Can’t Wait For Christmas
I’ve heard a few songwriters’ attempts at Christmas songs the last two months and yours is absolutely the best. Your melody is catchy, interesting, and the perfect balance of uniqueness blended with allusions to the best Christmas songs in this genre. You’ve captured the feeling in the lyrics... Read More