Songwriting Pro: Helping Songwriters Turn Pro.

Join Songwriting Pro Today!

Write like a pro, do business like a pro & connect to the pros. Join the Songwriting Pro community today!

January 06, 2014

Matt Rees gave feedback on Willy Don't Need No Shoes

Nice job. I would vary the chorus a little, though, by getting more into the Bo Diddly and less of the travelling beat, and maybe coming to a crescendo for chorus line 4 “plays it all” then a hard stop for chorus line 5 “guitar man.” Guitar burst back in on “shoes.”

January 02, 2014

Matt Rees gave feedback on Sentimental Way

Good arrangement. The intro works well, also as a turnaround. The bridge and modulation come at the right time. I would just change the melody of “I don’t wonder where she is” for variation away from the verses. Creative ending too - makes me want to make mine more... Read More

December 30, 2013

Matt Rees gave feedback on Quiet Silence

They should pay you to design the song photos. Yours are amazingly well composed and so representative of the song meanings. This song is a great start. The only feedback I can think of is to suggest studying songs from your favorite artists that are close to being only one... Read More

December 30, 2013

Matt Rees gave feedback on They All Blame me

Great guitar part. The chords are nice, then haunting in the perfect ways at the perfect times. I love the chorus, but below I’ve rearranged the lines of the verses that I like best in a way I think tells the story. Sorry if the feedback is too bold.... Read More

December 30, 2013

Matt Rees gave feedback on Talking to a Ghost

Great song. very catchy, interest holding, and easy to relate to. If the old, sad, drinking alone you is the ghost, that’s a really cool metaphor. But the pronouns make finding the meaning a little too difficult for the pop music listener. Maybe try: now I’m talking to... Read More

Welcome back!

Username or Email:

Password:

×

Share this Frettie profile with others.

Like this songwriter? Share their music and profile with your friends, fans and fellow songwriters.

×

Purchase A Song Review from Matt.


Whoops!

Sorry about that, but you can't purchase a Song Review from yourself.

×