Charlie Jacob gave feedback on Time To Hit The Road

Wayne, First, did you consider who your audience is? Did you ask yourself who wants to hear your song? You say…you don’t understand. I guess you’re right. I don’t understand. I’m not sure who would. Possibly, try to make us understand. If no one can... Read More

Charlie Jacob gave feedback on Willy Don't Need No Shoes

Benny,   Different kind of story here. The first verse says he picks with his toes. Maybe get that in the chorus?   Pick that guitar with them 5 toes   This guitar man can’t wear no shoes   Don’t “need” seems inaccurate. If he’s picking with his... Read More

Charlie Jacob gave feedback on Change The World

Joey,   We are the “kings” of our songs. We decide what we want to say. Although others may make suggestions, we can change our songs…or not.   I’m fine with your repetition.   I’ve heard some weak songs. Hammering the “hook” doesn’t strengthen a song.... Read More

Charlie Jacob gave feedback on Song 55

Jacob, Nice performance. First….Your title. Song 55. I have no idea what to expect. Retired?? Having a Grand Slam at Denny’s?? Nothing, about the title, peaks my interest. The song should play well at coffee shops. However, I wasn’t wowed by the many generic words and phrases. Lots... Read More

Charlie Jacob gave feedback on Plank

Matt, Not sure what your intent is. If you perform in the round, or at coffee shops, this song will probably be well received. However, I’d suggest the singer tries to enunciate much better. I wasn’t sure what some words were. Left me wondering. Somewhat distracting because the... Read More