Joined: November 18, 2013
Charlie Likes: 0 Songs
Charlie Jacob gave feedback on Absolute Eyes
Orion, Nice Vocals. I agree with Lach’s comments. The chorus doesn’t quite work. Either you’ll fall down, or you won’t. Most choruses seem stronger.. if they don’t change. Since you didn’t change the chorus, the song doesn’t seem to... Read More
Charlie Jacob gave feedback on Talking to a Ghost
Eric, Definitely catchy! Had to sing a song of mine. To wash your song out. Writing looks like it’s a she Why does she have to haunt me Stays away when friends around Would she follow me to another town
Charlie Jacob gave feedback on Talking to a Ghost
Eric, I went to several other web sites. I spent a few minutes. I walked away from my computer. Your song popped into my head. Eric…Something’s catchy about the song. Still, I don’t think you’ve come close to developing the HOOK.
Charlie Jacob gave feedback on Talking to a Ghost
Eric, I had a real problem with your pronouns. Who does “your” refer to? Town…cheap rhyme. Who is she? What does feeling bad have to do with anything? Die? Than pick up the phone…guess he could invite others over? Seems like a “cheap” rhyme. Hook has potential !!... Read More
Charlie Jacob gave feedback on Baby I Love You
Definitely goes back to the 50’s or early 60s. Not sure about the… Yes I do. Think I’d rather hear.. Close to me. Might not fit in one place. Would work everywhere else. Nice sound. Thanks for the trip on Memory Lane. Charlie Jacob