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Charlie Jacob

December 05, 2013

Charlie Jacob gave feedback on Spirits For Christmas

Dave,   Nice song.   There are rules and guidelines for song structure. You might want to consider a different structure. Maybe start with the chorus. I like the musical intro, but didn’t consider your first verse a strong start. Gotta rope me in….early. Start with the chorus??... Read More

November 27, 2013

Charlie Jacob gave feedback on Feel For You

Don’t know Why? I can’t play your songs. I can play songs by other songwriters.

November 27, 2013

Charlie Jacob gave feedback on Let's Take A Drive

Mary, The song is well crafted. Even so, you may have competing hooks. The song might be titled Back to You. You repeat Back To You in the tag. I’ve never had a song recorded by an artist. So, I’m only giving you my 2 cents worth. However, your... Read More

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