Taking a drive down memory lane.
Mary,
The song is well crafted. Even so, you may have competing hooks. The song might be titled Back to You. You repeat Back To You in the tag. I’ve never had a song recorded by an artist. So, I’m only giving you my 2 cents worth. However, your song doesn’t offer anything I haven’t heard many times. Turn the radio on, put the windows down, and let’s drive.
Keith Urban could write this song, and sing it. He’s a performer/songwriter. It seems unlikely that a performer would find anything new or compelling. I’m not sure what your intent is. I’d suggest you ask yourself….before you write a song…has this song been previously written? What new slant can I offer?
November 27, 2013
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Hi Mary-sorry for taking so long to get back to you. Great song. Love the melody and the lyrics. Vocals are a hit as well. Good song to sit and reflect on. Well done!
December 11, 2013
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Mary, I think it is a beautiful song and well done. It brings back memories.
November 25, 2013
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Mary,
The song is well crafted. Even so, you may have competing hooks. The song might be titled Back to You. You repeat Back To You in the tag. I’ve never had a song recorded by an artist. So, I’m only giving you my 2 cents worth. However, your song doesn’t offer anything I haven’t heard many times. Turn the radio on, put the windows down, and let’s drive.
Keith Urban could write this song, and sing it. He’s a performer/songwriter. It seems unlikely that a performer would find anything new or compelling. I’m not sure what your intent is. I’d suggest you ask yourself….before you write a song…has this song been previously written? What new slant can I offer?
November 27, 2013
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Hi Mary-sorry for taking so long to get back to you. Great song. Love the melody and the lyrics. Vocals are a hit as well. Good song to sit and reflect on. Well done!
December 11, 2013
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Mary, I think it is a beautiful song and well done. It brings back memories.
November 25, 2013
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