John Roberton gave feedback on Without Crowns

Hey Doug, another great song. I have to say I agree with Holden’s feedback. I think Holden’s thought about “time would run short” would be an interesting final punctuation to the story - if thats what you wanted to leave as a final thought. Really enjoyed the song,... Read More

John Roberton gave feedback on Hiatus (work tape)

Hey Doug, really enjoyed the song. I thought your lyrics were great. I didn’t mind Holden’s suggestion but I also liked your original lyrics for “pages”. I thought the music and the lyrics created a nice little vibe. Great work!

John Roberton gave feedback on This is a good day

Great tune, great lyrics! I love the flow of the idea through the song and the cleverness of the lyrics. Even though it’s a subject thats been covered many times before it feels fresh. Great song for an artist to get the crowd into a good mood for sure.... Read More

John Roberton gave feedback on Ribbons on a Kite

Hi Traci, really enjoyed that song - congratulations! Loved the melody and lyrics. I loved the way you told the story.

John Roberton gave feedback on Father to Father

Wow Brandon, you really captured that experience beautifully. I so enjoyed hearing that. The lyrics were were amazing. Best of luck and thanks for sharing.