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Allan Rosensweig

July 02, 2022

Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on Last Beer In Texas

Great song Valentine.  Best of luck with this one.

June 17, 2022

Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on Nothin' On You

One other thing…I just noticed the rhyming scheme is different in verse 2 than verse 1.  In the first verse lines 4 and 5 rhyme, and in the second verse it looks like lines 3 and 5 rhyme.  Just something I noticed. 

June 17, 2022

Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on Nothin' On You

Great song Mr. Sheldon.  Definitely an excellent concept and very well written.  My only criticism would be the lack of rhyme of “slow” and “old” in the chorus.  To my ears it feels like there should be a rhyme there.  But this is surely one of... Read More

June 09, 2022

Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on angels are waiting

Phenomenal job Ben.  I really enjoyed it.  Really moving song.  Could you post the lyrics?

June 09, 2022

Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on Black Sweatshirt

Excellent song.  Wondering if you could post the lyrics.  I really enjoyed it.

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