Joined: July 18, 2020
Allan Likes: 162 Songs
Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on Nothin' On You
One other thing…I just noticed the rhyming scheme is different in verse 2 than verse 1. In the first verse lines 4 and 5 rhyme, and in the second verse it looks like lines 3 and 5 rhyme. Just something I noticed.
Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on Nothin' On You
Great song Mr. Sheldon. Definitely an excellent concept and very well written. My only criticism would be the lack of rhyme of “slow” and “old” in the chorus. To my ears it feels like there should be a rhyme there. But this is surely one of... Read More
Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on angels are waiting
Phenomenal job Ben. I really enjoyed it. Really moving song. Could you post the lyrics?
Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on Black Sweatshirt
Excellent song. Wondering if you could post the lyrics. I really enjoyed it.
Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on Last Beer In Texas
Great song Valentine. Best of luck with this one.