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Allan Rosensweig

December 16, 2022

Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on Getting Over You

Great lyrics Randall.  I really enjoyed it.  Thanks for posting.

October 14, 2022

Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on Born in Bethlehem

Fantastic song!

July 02, 2022

Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on Girl It Ain’t Me

Excellent song Carey.  I really enjoyed it.  Great chorus.

July 02, 2022

Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on Last Beer In Texas

Great song Valentine.  Best of luck with this one.

June 17, 2022

Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on Nothin' On You

One other thing…I just noticed the rhyming scheme is different in verse 2 than verse 1.  In the first verse lines 4 and 5 rhyme, and in the second verse it looks like lines 3 and 5 rhyme.  Just something I noticed. 

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