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Black Sweatshirt

Leni Black

June 09, 2022

Genre: Pop

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Hi -
This is a song I wrote when I show myself in the mirror wearing my ex boyfriend sweatshirt he had left at my parents house. I specifically left it there so I wouldn't have to look at it, I avoided it for years and finally one day I put it on.

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This song isn't out yet, but I think it is one with the most potential for me to try and get a publishing deal and I really want it to be perfect. Any feedback is welcome.


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Allan Rosensweig

Excellent song.  Wondering if you could post the lyrics.  I really enjoyed it.

June 09, 2022

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Valentine Sheldon

WOW! I LOVE THIS SONG! Congratulations! Taylor Swift comes to mind, but only tangentally, because it is SO GOOD. I would love to see the lyric sheet. My only note is that I think the mix is a bit off in places where your voice is overpowered by the instruments and I really want to hear you on top of the instruments not the other way around. Good luck with this!!

June 17, 2022

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Brent Baxter

Really good stuff, Leni!

June 22, 2022

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Black Sweatshirt

Written by Leni Black

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Allan Rosensweig

Excellent song.  Wondering if you could post the lyrics.  I really enjoyed it.

June 09, 2022

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Valentine Sheldon

WOW! I LOVE THIS SONG! Congratulations! Taylor Swift comes to mind, but only tangentally, because it is SO GOOD. I would love to see the lyric sheet. My only note is that I think the mix is a bit off in places where your voice is overpowered by the instruments and I really want to hear you on top of the instruments not the other way around. Good luck with this!!

June 17, 2022

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Brent Baxter

Really good stuff, Leni!

June 22, 2022


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