Joined: July 18, 2020
Allan Likes: 162 Songs
Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on Give Me a Lake
Hey Peter, Just a few observations. I’m no expert so take them with a grain of salt. First, the chorus is great. Great lyrics and melody. I wouldn’t change a thing. Now, the beginning of the first verse makes it seem like you are outside sweating in... Read More
Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on Back It Up
Great lyrics with a great message. I really enjoyed it.
Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on I Love
Hi Jenn Sorrry about your loss. It is a very heartfelt song with beautiful lyrics. I love the line “connected all the dots they would all lead back to you. With a few minor changes it could be an excellent Christian song too. I really enjoyed it. Well... Read More
Allan Rosensweig gave feedback on Muscadine Wine (country)
Bravo Tray, Another amazing lyric filled with great imagery. Mamaw making homemade wine in her shorts and bra. The lyric makes you feel like you are part of the scene. Great chorus. I wish you success with this one.