My father died four months ago.
This is my tribute to him.
He was the kindest, gentlest, selfless man I will ever know.
He was the perfect dad for me.
Thanks very much, Allan.
It’s simple, but it’s mine and his. 
I would love to hear what changes you think would make it a good Christian song.
Jenn
January 25, 2025
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I Love
Lyrics and melody by Jenn Katusha
Music by Abbie Parker
vocals uncredited
No matter how much I say, you listen
No matter how I say it, you still love
However much I take (and I know I take a lot)
You never make me feel like it’s too much
I don’t know know what I did to deserve you
And have you standing right by my side
But I do know if I searched the whole world over
I wouldn’t find another you even if I tried
Pre-chorus
If I made a list of the good I do
And connected all the dots they would all lead back to you
Chorus
Because of you I dream
And have wings that let me fly
Because of you I wonder
And I’m always and forever asking why
Thanks to you I give
And believe that I’m enough
Thanks to you live
And all thanks to you I love
Whenever I call you come running
Even when you have someplace else to be
And all that you say and do for others
Sends the message you first, then me
When life brings me to my knees
I hear your voice deep inside my head
And remember part of me is always you
I stand up dust off and forge ahead
Pre-chorus
If I made a list of the good I do
And connected all the dots they all lead back to you
Chorus
Because of you I dream
And have wings that let me fly
Because of you I wonder
And I’m always and forever asking why
Thanks to you I give
And believe that I’m enough
Thanks to you live
And all thanks to you I love
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Hi Jenn
Sorrry about your loss. It is a very heartfelt song with beautiful lyrics. I love the line “connected all the dots they would all lead back to you. With a few minor changes it could be an excellent Christian song too.
I really enjoyed it. Well done.
January 24, 2025
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Thanks very much, Allan.
It’s simple, but it’s mine and his.
I would love to hear what changes you think would make it a good Christian song.
Jenn
January 25, 2025
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Allan Rosensweig
Hi Jenn
Sorrry about your loss. It is a very heartfelt song with beautiful lyrics. I love the line “connected all the dots they would all lead back to you. With a few minor changes it could be an excellent Christian song too.
I really enjoyed it. Well done.
January 24, 2025
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