Rick Lane gave feedback on Just Because

“Dancing, even thought I don’t”. I love that line. Very relatable to those of us that don’t know how to dance, and it’s a unique way to show the your commitment and love to the person you’re singing to. I don’t dance, but holding someone... Read More

Rick Lane gave feedback on Daytona - Hell Yeah!

Just had another comment on that one line: When you read those lines, it makes you picture either an ice cream cone, or cute college girls from San Antone, right? Maybe a tweak or two to your lines would make the listener picture cute college girls with eating ice cream... Read More

Rick Lane gave feedback on Daytona - Hell Yeah!

“Cute as sprinkles on an ice cream cone”. I love that line. Unique and rolls off the tongue nicely. I know it would make that line too long, but “college girls” goes good with that first line with the c and s sounds. “College girls cute as sprinkles on an... Read More

Rick Lane gave feedback on The Keys

Very nice song. I love the the concept of the spoken words for the long verses and how that contrasts with the harmonized singing parts. I like the the use of the more traditional song form for this, opposed to the modern day vese/chorus form. The lyrics and music... Read More

Rick Lane gave feedback on Classroom 105

So, those words are sort of a salute and reference to the 70s’. I like that explanation! And, you know, I like that word because it is something different and unique from the norm, and it catches your attention. Kind of like how I’ve heard Brent reference using the... Read More