Priscilla Ederle

Overall I like this song. I think you have a good, strong melody and hook. Your lyrics all make sense and have nice imagery that I can picture. My only main feedback is this line doesn’t seem necessary.

“Love does what love does… Just because”

I wonder if there’s a way to make this lyric more descriptive to “show” and not “tell”. It might make it a more memorable bridge and give an opportunity to really make it shine. The melody builds up nicely here though.

“You know everything I do
Is to try and make each day as special as you”

Overall, a really lovely song! I hope my feedback was helpful. I’m not a professional songwriter and have no song hits, so take it with a grain of salt. Just my 2 cents!

Rick Lane

“Dancing, even thought I don’t”. I love that line. Very relatable to those of us that don’t know how to dance, and it’s a unique way to show the your commitment and love to the person you’re singing to. I don’t dance, but holding someone I’m crazy about in the moonlight? I’m dancing!

Being honest, I didn’t listen to the audio. I’m just reading the lyrics. In that second verse, I pictured Hershey’s Kisses for the candy treats. Then, I thought maybe those two lines could have been:
Candy kisses to show I care
Soft kisses landing on your neck
or
Hershey’s kisses to show I care
Soft kisses landing on your neck.

Just my very unprofessional opinion. Nice job!