Rick Lane gave feedback on Drink About It

Love the sound of this, Michael. Really catchy melody. Good sounding demo too. Here’s a couple of things that jumped out at me that might help: - I think I would sing the 2nd and 6th lines of your chorus, so that they match up the rhyme with the... Read More

Rick Lane gave feedback on Bible By The Bed

Oh, one more thing. You could say “It belonged to my mama’s mother” for that one line. Lots of alliteration with that “m” sound in that one.

Rick Lane gave feedback on Bible By The Bed

Hello Cameron, I just read your first verse, and I know that this is a personal story of yours, so anyone would understand if you didn’t want to change who your bible was handed down from, but I read that first verse one time and instantly saw something that... Read More

Rick Lane gave feedback on Sleepless Nights

New and shorter version posted 6/27/20 with shorter first verse to get to the chorus quicker.

Rick Lane gave feedback on Georgia Sunshine

This is a really pretty song, and the acoustic vocal recording is wonderful. The lyric is very poetic and not literal, which I get is your type of writing, but there are some lines that I just can’t quite interpret, such as “strength from my crown, cut me from... Read More