Joined: September 27, 2019
Paul Likes: 8 Songs
Paul deMarco gave feedback on To Be With You (Michelle Ingrham)
Beautiful song well delivered… love the imagery in verse 2… i know its heartfelt… and you have a great vibrato not overdone… the guitar melody motif carries it well too… enjoyed it ... wanted more!
Paul deMarco gave feedback on Here's To You (Wanda Moore Kielblock)
Really like this… great furniture in the detail… This may seem like a small thing but I felt that the first “here’s to you” should come down and intimate… Then the seconds pitch up a little… Then the final one hits high then come down like you do… Just... Read More
Paul deMarco gave feedback on Really Win Big
Thanks Brent we’ll look at that… I guess we’re always trying to keep the length… But maybe we can do that… Every chorus you think?
Paul deMarco gave feedback on Raining Again
Great job with that kick drum and love how you use guitars in place of keyboard arps My first thought was we’re told get a positive hook… But I think you’re trying to alter perceptions cos song feels happy and the rain is a positive thing I get... Read More
Paul deMarco gave feedback on That’s how love grows
great story for a song… well written… sweet… very james taylor… you have a good voice… seems like there is some chorus on the vocal that i dont think you need… a pure vocal would sound much better and like i say your voice is great! enjoyed the listen!