Kay Mott Williams sent me some great lyrics and heard a song that Taylor swift or Katy Perry or even Cyrus could do... With a little Lenny Kravitz too
Any feedback don't hold back
Thanks Brent we’ll look at that… I guess we’re always trying to keep the length… But maybe we can do that… Every chorus you think?
October 04, 2019
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I really liked this song. This line is really nice and jumped out at me.
“Life is about the journey
Pick a road don’t ride the brake”
This is a very modern sounding pop song. I like the message and the vibe of this song. It was very enjoyable to listen to. I could definitely hear this song on the radio.
January 15, 2020
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Really Win Big
By Paul deMarco & Kay Mott
….I’m gonna win big
I hit the gas and drive through the fire
If what I want is on the other side
Flames won’t overtake me no
No slowing down no going around
I hit it head on…
PreChorus
Life is about the journey
Pick a road don’t ride the brake
Which way you choose depends
On the risks you’re willing to take
Chorus
Hey... I’m gonna hang it all out
Hey... I’m gonna go all in
Yeah... Then I’m gonna find out
What it feels like to really win big…really win big
Verse 2
If I can’t dance I’ll dive for the swim
Learn to laugh at myself, or get new friends
Slay every dragon standing in my way
If I get stuck here’s what I say (yeah here’s what I say)
Prechorus
Life is about the Journey
Pick a road don’t ride the brake
Which way you choose depends
On the risks you’re willing to take
Chorus
Hey... I’m gonna hang it all out
Hey... I’m gonna go all in
Yeah... Then I’m gonna find out
What it feels like to really win big…really win big
Bridge
You got to stand up for yourself
Don’t wait around for someone else to fight your battles
With every door that’s closing
You look for the window open
You’re gonna thank yourself... someday
Chorus
You’re gonna hang it all out
You're gonna go all in
Then you'll really find out
What it feels like to really win
(Chorus)
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Hey, Paul! Thanks for sharing your song with us. Some really cool vibe here. I like that it’s a positive message. I wanted that chorus to double, structurally- I wasn’t ready for it to end so soon.
I also like the change in the bridge.
Hope that helps. Good work. Keep going!
October 04, 2019
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Thanks Brent we’ll look at that… I guess we’re always trying to keep the length… But maybe we can do that… Every chorus you think?
October 04, 2019
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I really liked this song. This line is really nice and jumped out at me.
“Life is about the journey
Pick a road don’t ride the brake”
This is a very modern sounding pop song. I like the message and the vibe of this song. It was very enjoyable to listen to. I could definitely hear this song on the radio.
January 15, 2020
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Hey, Paul! Thanks for sharing your song with us. Some really cool vibe here. I like that it’s a positive message. I wanted that chorus to double, structurally- I wasn’t ready for it to end so soon.
I also like the change in the bridge.
Hope that helps. Good work. Keep going!
October 04, 2019
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