“Raining again” is a fantasy song about spending a rainy day in bed with your lover.
I would like to request the following feedbacks. Lyrics, melody, song structure
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Great job with that kick drum and love how you use guitars in place of keyboard arps
My first thought was we’re told get a positive hook… But I think you’re trying to alter perceptions cos song feels happy and the rain is a positive thing I get that… Like the Coldplay high oohs and aahs
Like it… The tickling lyrics felt a little awkward but I’ve learnt that sometimes that can make the song memorable
Nice work
October 01, 2019
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Paul deMarco
Great job with that kick drum and love how you use guitars in place of keyboard arps
My first thought was we’re told get a positive hook… But I think you’re trying to alter perceptions cos song feels happy and the rain is a positive thing I get that… Like the Coldplay high oohs and aahs
Like it… The tickling lyrics felt a little awkward but I’ve learnt that sometimes that can make the song memorable
Nice work
October 01, 2019
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