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Michael Parker

www.thegoldenponies.com

October 28, 2019

Michael Parker gave feedback on Broken (worktape)

I like the tone of this and the overall feel and way the hook works.  My issue is more with not knowing where I am at any given time.  That is… in V1, she’s apparently with him (Now you’re staring out the window/I’m on... Read More

October 21, 2019

Michael Parker gave feedback on Spend the Night

Does the song connect to you as a listener? As a country fan… how could it not.  Has a nice 90’s feel to me, which is on the way back. Good story? I feel like it’s pretty standard; a tale told once (or more) per country album since... Read More

October 21, 2019

Michael Parker gave feedback on Jimmy Joe Jack Jones Jr.

Nice one!  I do think you have the potential to tighten up some of the writing, but the bones and most of the guts are on this one!  It struck me that you use “fun” when referring to Nell twice in the first three verses.  I feel... Read More

October 11, 2019

Michael Parker gave feedback on This Time Of Year (Give Thanks)

Enjoyed it.  Like most Christmas songs, the imagery seems viewed through evergreen-colored glasses.  But your intention isn’t to subvert expectations, it’s to meet them… And I think this succeeds.  The one thought I had while listening is that this could be a progression song. That... Read More

October 10, 2019

Michael Parker gave feedback on I Wish I Had Written That Song

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