Joined: July 20, 2018
Bob Likes: 19 Songs
Bob Abner gave feedback on Just Like That, Only Better
Frank Renfordt, thanks very much, both for listening and for feedback. Your comment about not putting the chorus first definitely caught my attention—I just now realized that the reason I did that was probably (subconsciously) so that the song would seem more “safe” to people in church services (my... Read More
Bob Abner gave feedback on Missing You Today
Nice sweet touching lyrics—though I do think the lyrics would have seemed more affecting if the musical arrangement weren’t quite so lush (would have preferred a little more musical “sparseness” to go with the lyric sense of “inevitable loss”)—a little more George Jones, a little less Bobby... Read More
Bob Abner gave feedback on Love’s Gonna Get Us All
Not so fond (musically) of the section that starts with “It’s not fate, it’s not luck”
Bob Abner gave feedback on Just Like That, Only Better
Frank Renfordt, after having thought about it (not starting out with the chorus), I think you’re right on the money: 1) I like the idea of not giving the hook away quite as early in the song, and 2) it gets me a little closer to that radio formula of a... Read More