This is a song for anyone who struggles being human
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Hi Anthony - a sensitive, intelligent lyric and a melody which fits well - I like your poetic style. Good job!
August 02, 2018
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I too like your style. Unpretentious and very easy listening. You also know how to make a guitar sound like it should. Some just slam-bang on their guitars, distracting from their song. You know how to pair them together nicely. You’re dong good work Anthony.
October 26, 2018
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Maybe That’s Crazy
Do you put on all that make up trying to put a wall up
Wearing what you hope’s a good disguise
That’s like sitting in a circus hoping no one’s gonna notice
That the tents on fire
Can’t you see just maybe that’s crazy
Are you scrolling through your smart phone and criticizing photos
Of what you think is someone’s perfect life
That's like owning forty acres but jealous that your neighbor
Owns on couple on the other side
Can't you see just maybe that’s crazy
Cause you can't do the same thing time and again
Expecting something different is gonna happen
And what some would call insane hoping one day things will change
You might only call it wishful thinking
Are you drinking from a bitter well and have so long it's hard to tell
The thirst it won’t subside
That's like trying to fill a broken cup you’ll never truly fill it up
But you do it al the time
And you don’t see that maybe that’s crazy
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1) Anthony, I DO think your music is generally appealing. 2) Occasionally, your songs get a little too depressing (imho, this song is one of those). 3) This one seems a little “stiff” musically (never quite “gains fire/a spark.” 4) I DO think you are quite talented as a songwriter!
July 31, 2018
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Hi Anthony - a sensitive, intelligent lyric and a melody which fits well - I like your poetic style. Good job!
August 02, 2018
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I too like your style. Unpretentious and very easy listening. You also know how to make a guitar sound like it should. Some just slam-bang on their guitars, distracting from their song. You know how to pair them together nicely. You’re dong good work Anthony.
October 26, 2018
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1) Anthony, I DO think your music is generally appealing. 2) Occasionally, your songs get a little too depressing (imho, this song is one of those). 3) This one seems a little “stiff” musically (never quite “gains fire/a spark.” 4) I DO think you are quite talented as a songwriter!
July 31, 2018
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