Bob Abner gave feedback on God’s Little Half Acre

fwiw, I have thought several times that if you could do some co-writing with someone who is as strong “musically” as you are strong “lyrically”—that seems like it might well be a fruitful venture!!!

Bob Abner gave feedback on God’s Little Half Acre

Marvin, a nice set of lyrics which tells a sweet story—one thing I noticed (may not be an issue for anyone else)—I was sort of hoping that the bridge (“Three weeks passed, I went back…”) would musically build more (be sort of a musical “high point”). Anyway, one... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on Who's the Matter With You

Interesting title—Generally a little too rambling/meandering for my taste.

Bob Abner gave feedback on Caught Up In Your Love (feat. Suzy Alexman and Marq DeSouza)

Both musically and lyrically, this seems pretty simplistic: LYRICS: “I look into your eyes” [several times] “I can hear your heart beat” “I was caught up in your love” [in other words, too many cliched phrases] MUSIC (Chords) C   CM7   Am   C/G   F   G... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on YOU STANDING THERE

Musically (not in terms of production, but in terms of being harmonically/melodically solid) this song leaves me a little flat. Best wishes in all your songwriting endeavors!!!