Carol Katterjohn gave feedback on "In my rearview"

Nice job guys!

Carol Katterjohn gave feedback on Can't Do

Thanks for the positive feedback James, Dave and Marilyn. That’s an Interesting observation about the rhythm and meter of the chorus. Being so close to it as a writer sometimes it’s hard to pick up on those things. Will be interested in what others have to say.

Carol Katterjohn gave feedback on Good By Me

Yeah Dave it gets confusing. The listener does not have the benefit of a lyric sheet so that’s why I ask if the double meaning is clear?  On the second one it could also be interpreted as ‘It’s good by (ok with) me if it’s good-bye ... Read More

Carol Katterjohn gave feedback on Chill

You nailed it Christian. Great imagery. Can you tell me who did your demo. Is that you singing? Was wondering if you ever do co-writes? I can send you links to some of my songs if interested.

Carol Katterjohn gave feedback on If I Go First

Nice!! Usually I tend to think the chorus should be the same throughout, but not this time. The imagery and story are superb.