Dori Weaver gave feedback on God’s Little Half Acre

Listening and be touched by this story Marvin.  The chorus is strong and the truth is honest and heartfelt.  Really love this song Marvin.

Dori Weaver gave feedback on You Can’t Save Yourself

I agree the message here is very positive.  Reid, that chorus is a gem in the rough.  Regarding the “You can’t save yourself” please try holding that phrase out longer and melody could be higher to set it apart from the verse, creating greater contrast…honestly, make... Read More

Dori Weaver gave feedback on If I Go First

Hi Guy! A beautiful tenderhearted story that chronicles the lives of two very special people through their love, imagery and excellent lyrics!  The whole piece is worth several listens with en pointe vocals and production.  Superb job Guy!

Dori Weaver gave feedback on Reverie

I don’t like it…..I LOVE it!  It resonates very well with me too and very impressionistic indeed.  I am a Debussy devotee from way back.  The chord changes are beautiful and the movement flows effortlessly Bob.  It’s so nice to hear this kind... Read More

Dori Weaver gave feedback on Like It Was

Hi Brett!  Cool song!  The inner rhyming on the first verse line 3 just makes that verse weave beautifully.  I am certainly no expert but the first verse and second verse begin with a story then that idea seems to be looking for more development….like I want... Read More