Dori Weaver gave feedback on Hallelujah Homecoming

You are in great company with Kenna!  This is a hallelujah song for sure Brent.  Sounds like you are figuring this genre out just perfectly!  Congrats, continued hallelujahs and thanks for the new and upgraded website:)

Dori Weaver gave feedback on Mining For Diamonds

Hi Reid, I love how positive the lyrics are as well as the idea here and the metaphors that you use.  It appears that you have some great suggestions from others who have given their feedback. I’m sure you’ll be tweaking and fine tuning this one. ... Read More

Dori Weaver gave feedback on Rock and Roll Women

Great concept here Reid!  The chorus melodically could be stronger with phrasing different from the verse.  The chorus words are wonderful in my opinion….just gotta get to the chorus a little faster from the verses…kinda too long…make that chorus stand out so it smacks us... Read More

Dori Weaver gave feedback on Who's the Matter With You

I don’t know Reid, it’s nice but I hope you don’t mind me saying that it needs more of a story….you know that writer’s rule, “don’t tell me, show me.”  Show us so that we can feel what the singer is feeling. ... Read More

Dori Weaver gave feedback on You Can’t Save Yourself

Reid, I just listened to the updated version and wow sounds very cool!!  Writing is hard enough but it’s the rewrites that take work and obviously you have been working very hard…great job, congrats!