Joined: May 17, 2018
Jack Likes: 23 Songs
Jack Speer gave feedback on KNEE-JERK THINGS
Thank you, Earla DeCoursey, that means a lot as it’s one of my earliest songs while battling a deep depression over losing my dad. I plan to re-write it, as it needs a bridge. Again, many thanks for your kind words!
Jack Speer gave feedback on In The Middle
Hi Evan, I’ve certainly been “In the middle,” so I could identify with the song. It seems like your chord progression repeatee Am, G, F, throughout the song… I was hoping to hear something different at the chorus (possibly C, Dm, G). That’s just me,... Read More
Jack Speer gave feedback on Audition
More than everything else, the little thing that hangs with me (earworm) after hearing the song 3 times is that pickup (four, 1/16th notes) to the 8th beat in the intro and sometimes in the verses. It’s like a tease, bc my ear listens for this riff at every ... Read More
Jack Speer gave feedback on Love of a Woman
Marvin, you continue to maintain consistency. You’ve definitely figured out the formula for writing heartfelt material. I like that simple, 6-note piano riff (C, D, B then A, C, G). It’s interesting how such a simple riff can hang with you (those crazy earworms) long... Read More