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Frank Renfordt

August 24, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Diamonds and Pearls

Hi Tommy, I think with the right production, a better singer and some changes in the chorus melody, to make it a bit more catchy, this can be a nice one. Have you tried a 3/4 or 6/8 rhythm?  Listen to Keith Urbans - ‘Blue ain’t your color’ it has... Read More

August 24, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Made Me Believe

Hi Kristina, your lyric has a good start with very nice imagery. I think your chorus could be more catchy, if you only would rhyme at least the hook line. It feels like you have only focused on the message. Also the chorus melody doesn’t separate the chorus section... Read More

August 24, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Texas Red White and Blue

Hi Kristina, You described very nicely the situation, how in an emergency all people stand together. I think that’s what makes us human, whether in Texas or in other parts of the world.

August 24, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on WHAT WE’RE DRINKIN’ O

Hi Keith, listened to your song and had the feeling that it is not consistent in its genre. I think it’s more Blues than Country and I would recommend to make it sound like a Blues song all through the song, the Chorus doesn’t feel that bluesy, try... Read More

August 24, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Farm Hands

Sounds like real Country!

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