I had a huge crush on this guy, so I gave him this song. We've been dating for over a year and a half now 
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I’ve been thinking about you for a little too long now
I just can’t seem to get you outta my head, no outta my head Maybe it’s those bright blue eyes, or maybe your smile
But I just can’t seem to get you outta my heart, no outta my heart And you probably think I’m insane, oh
But you take my breath away
Because
CHORUS
You are everything I, Everything I ever wanted And I can’t believe I found someone like you And I promise, if you let me
I’ll be your one and only
And I swear I’m not crazy
I just wanna be your only girl
oh (3x)
I’ve been listening to the same song over and over cause
It reminds me of you so I’m singing along, I’m singing along And you might not realize this but
You’re kinda amazing just the way you are
So don’t ever change, don’t you dare ever change
And I’m falling too fast it’s true, oh
But really who wouldn’t fall for you?
Because
CHORUS
And you don’t even realize what you do to me inside Every time you look in my eyes
But I’m never giving up, no
I will find a way to make you mine someday, cause
CHORUS (2x)
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Alyssa - I love this song! The mandolin over the uke (I think I hear that) is genius - such a great sound. And in the verses where you go: “outta my head, no outta my head” really spices up the groove and melody. This is just a happy, uptempo, great melody, song. Nothing to critique in my opinion.
You probably already know this, but you are very talented in many ways.
December 07, 2013
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Dick Plunk
Alyssa - I love this song! The mandolin over the uke (I think I hear that) is genius - such a great sound. And in the verses where you go: “outta my head, no outta my head” really spices up the groove and melody. This is just a happy, uptempo, great melody, song. Nothing to critique in my opinion.
You probably already know this, but you are very talented in many ways.
December 07, 2013
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