Dick Plunk gave feedback on BELLA BLUE

Nathan, This is really pretty and has some nice lines in it. However, I was trying to nail down the structure (verse, chorus, or whatever) and I could not come up with one. I wanted to hear something repeatable (a chorus) that I could look forward to and which broke... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on You Remind Me

Very nice. I attended a SW seminar in which they said that (for commercial writing) you should be sure that the hook stands out. I loved the way you did the “hook - line - hook - line, etc.” thing throughout the chorus. When i first looked at the lyric,... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Be Amazing

David - really cool, rocking song. I’d bet that this gets a good crowd response when you play it out. Good production, too. My only critique point is: I think all your verses (except the first one) are very strong and support your theme of “be amazing and don’... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Fixin' Sh*t

George, This is a cool song. I think the sentiment is one that many, many men can relate to. I like the melody and production, too. I’m not a prude and have actually used “shit” in a song or two. However, I think the word actually degrades this song... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on The Pluto Song (Me and Clyde)

Charlie, This is a really good song. It gave me goosebumps. You are such a good storyteller. And I said it on one of your other songs - I love your voice. Nothing to critique here - just a damn good song.