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Thankyou Dennis, I am so glad you like it , I didn’t put too much effect on the vocals but for some reason when the WAV file was compressed to MP3 the vocals sounded effected , I think you’re absolutely right I will try to re-master this . Thankyou so much for taking the time to listen .
July 28, 2014
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Nathan,
This is really pretty and has some nice lines in it. However, I was trying to nail down the structure (verse, chorus, or whatever) and I could not come up with one. I wanted to hear something repeatable (a chorus) that I could look forward to and which broke up the verses. (Maybe I just missed it.) While I really liked the feel of this, I think it could be better with a distinct chorus.
July 30, 2014
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blue oh bella blue
I'de run away with you my bella blue
away from the city away from the noise
all the people so busy
rushin round it hurts my dizzy head
when my heads on my pillow
dreaming of you yeah dreamin of you
what's it like to run so wild and free now
under the stars and under the moon
nights are so long and days are so new
i want to be with you
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Nathan,
I can’t tell what this is about specifically, but I do like it. It’s really cool! The music is really neat and I feel it just really works well with the mystical feel of the lyrics. I’m not sure what I’d change. As i’ve said before, me personally i’m not always into the “effects”, but I think that’s a personal preference.
July 28, 2014
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Thankyou Dennis, I am so glad you like it , I didn’t put too much effect on the vocals but for some reason when the WAV file was compressed to MP3 the vocals sounded effected , I think you’re absolutely right I will try to re-master this . Thankyou so much for taking the time to listen .
July 28, 2014
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Nathan,
This is really pretty and has some nice lines in it. However, I was trying to nail down the structure (verse, chorus, or whatever) and I could not come up with one. I wanted to hear something repeatable (a chorus) that I could look forward to and which broke up the verses. (Maybe I just missed it.) While I really liked the feel of this, I think it could be better with a distinct chorus.
July 30, 2014
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Dennis Field
Nathan,
I can’t tell what this is about specifically, but I do like it. It’s really cool! The music is really neat and I feel it just really works well with the mystical feel of the lyrics. I’m not sure what I’d change. As i’ve said before, me personally i’m not always into the “effects”, but I think that’s a personal preference.
July 28, 2014
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