It's about having that awesome someone who always puts things into perspective for you.
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Very nice. I attended a SW seminar in which they said that (for commercial writing) you should be sure that the hook stands out. I loved the way you did the “hook - line - hook - line, etc.” thing throughout the chorus.
When i first looked at the lyric, my first thought was “oooh - too many words”. But your phrasing made it work just fine. I didn’t feel that they were rushed at all. Good job.
Another good Charlie Katt song.
July 20, 2014
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You Remind Me
© June 6, 2014 Charlie Katt • www.charliekatt.com
Verse 1
I was hoping to have arrived by thirty-two
But, many adventures never get good till halfway through
This is my story, I’ll start from the top as most folks do
Try and stay with me ‘cause it only gets good when I find you
Verse 2
I was a mess, yeah, but you didn’t care, you took my hand
‘Cause, many adventures never turn out the way we’ve planned
This is our story, it’s you and me from here on out
That was the first time that I found out what true love’s all about
Pre-Chorus
The way you speak to me is so unique to me
The way you show me that there’s more than this old life to think about
Chorus
You remind me
When we’re down we’re not knocked out
You remind me
To smile even when you’re not around
You remind me
We should live but never dwell
You remind me
To love is to forget about yourself
Verse 3
I was trying to be the best that I could be
But many intentions (make it hard to) look past things we see
Tell me a story that doesn’t involve a shining knight
(‘Cause) it’s hard to be stronger when I feel that I never see the light
Pre-Chorus
Cause all I do is wish, or break my promises
But you have told me that it’s not the things you do but who you are
[Chorus]
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I really like the way you use the photos for your song. I really love your sound. It’s always so happy and full of nice subtle sounds. I believe I hear clapping in the background is that right? If so, nice touch!
July 07, 2014
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Very nice. I attended a SW seminar in which they said that (for commercial writing) you should be sure that the hook stands out. I loved the way you did the “hook - line - hook - line, etc.” thing throughout the chorus.
When i first looked at the lyric, my first thought was “oooh - too many words”. But your phrasing made it work just fine. I didn’t feel that they were rushed at all. Good job.
Another good Charlie Katt song.
July 20, 2014
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Dennis Field
I really like the way you use the photos for your song. I really love your sound. It’s always so happy and full of nice subtle sounds. I believe I hear clapping in the background is that right? If so, nice touch!
July 07, 2014