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August 07, 2014

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Carolina

Ditto what Dan said. You should get him to do that “softer finger style guitar” for you. He is a master. You have some great lines in here. I love “life comes in a paper wrapper” and “the gypsy and the banker’s daughter”. Nice song.

August 07, 2014

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Somewhere Green

Randall, Very nice. I really like how the verses express the negative while the chorus is the dream. I also like how you keep the theme is the chorus, but continue to introduce more visuals of what the singer pines for. This is very singable and has a sweet melody. ... Read More

July 30, 2014

Dick Plunk gave feedback on AT THE CROSSROADS

Emma, Really cool - kind of a southern rock feel to it. And I agree with Earl - great singing. My only critique point would be that you change the pronoun in the chorus from “you” to “he” which is confusing. Are you talking about the same person or two... Read More

July 30, 2014

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Two Sides

Joshua, I love the feel, the chorus, and the premise of this song. I had 2 problems with the lyric. First - you started out in 1st person (“the man I am”)  and then switched to 3rd person. That makes it confusing. Are you still singing about the same guy?... Read More

July 30, 2014

Dick Plunk gave feedback on THE STARS STILL SHINE

Nathan, This is nice. You have painted some nice images with your lyric. This is not bad - but you end the chorus on a strange note. I expected you to drop back down to the root note, but you end on something else. It stands out, which is maybe... Read More

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