Brandon Barclay gave feedback on Do As I Say

There was always an explanation before the do as I do not as I say. Like a story had panned out before this grand happening. But you tell us the grand happening without a story first. Which gives it away, then when what we may or may not be expecting... Read More

Brandon Barclay gave feedback on Do As I Say

So the song starts out fun with the music. Then gets a bossy. It’s lyrically catchy, but not enough detail. It’s a song with advice in it. This song would be fun if the person was doing as the other person did. Then the advice came in. After... Read More

Brandon Barclay gave feedback on The Mill

Something at the end of the chorus that makes us want more. Or feel like we missed out on something. That leaves us humming the toon at the end of a sad story. Like. and this is just a quick example. and we laid to rest a man you never... Read More

Brandon Barclay gave feedback on IT ALL GOES GOOD WITH LOVE

For me. This line. Girl it all goes good with love, yeah it all goes good with love Because you say. any plans you make. When I heard the next line I expected “you” again. So my thought. Was that of saying It all goes good with you. Instead of... Read More

Brandon Barclay gave feedback on All I Will Ever Need

Sorry one more addition. If I said to my wife, in real life. Hey honey you are all the therapy I need. That could go over several different ways. With you I don’t need a shrink or whiskey. She would need me to explain. But if I said. You... Read More