Ive always thought this would be a good Keith Urban tune. Whats your thoughts?
Anything is welcome.
For me. This line.
Girl it all goes good with love, yeah it all goes good with love
Because you say. any plans you make.
When I heard the next line I expected “you” again.
So my thought. Was that of saying
It all goes good with you. Instead of it all goes good with love. This might change the title, but for me it feels more catchy. It all goes good with you. Just a suggestion. It all goes good with you just seems to flow too. Not sure why, but for me it does. It’s kind of like saying “how goes it with you?”
You could have some repeating phrase too then end it with it all goes god with love. Something like.
It all goes good with you, it all goes good with you, it all goes good with you, it all goes good with love. Something that sticks in the listeners head and they can’t stop thinking it.
January 24, 2018
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Sweet little song you have here! If I had to add feedback, I think Verse 2 is more lyrically interesting. Just a lot more going on there. Verse 1 is nice but I think you could set the scene in a shorter time, like 2 lines, and free up some opportunities for more imagery to make the song more unique! Definitely has that modern pop country sound! Good job!
January 29, 2018
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IT ALL GOES GOOD WITH LOVE
J.Street/ D. Lynch
VERSE 1
Lazy sunrise, I cover my eyes with the sheets
I roll over, just staring at you still fast asleep
Hey we got all weekend full of nothing better to do
We could go out, drive around, or I could stay under here with you
CHORUS
Watch the sun fade, waste the day away, any plans you make
Girl it all goes good with love, yeah it all goes good with love
Call up our friends, go out dancing till the night ends
Yeah it all goes good with love
It all goes good with love
VERSE 2
Theres an old dirt road, where nobody knows outside of town
We could packs us a lunch, find a good spot
And throw a blanket down
Or we could sit on the front porch, I get out my guitar and play you some songs
And when the night begins and the wine sinks in, well you'll sing along
CHORUS
REPEAT CHORUS
1
‘It all goes good with love’. Love it. My husband and I did movie downtown Nashville, stopped at a singer songwriter venue and now he’s sleeping sound and I’m writing a song….but ‘it all goes good with love’.
January 23, 2018
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For me. This line.
Girl it all goes good with love, yeah it all goes good with love
Because you say. any plans you make.
When I heard the next line I expected “you” again.
So my thought. Was that of saying
It all goes good with you. Instead of it all goes good with love. This might change the title, but for me it feels more catchy. It all goes good with you. Just a suggestion. It all goes good with you just seems to flow too. Not sure why, but for me it does. It’s kind of like saying “how goes it with you?”
You could have some repeating phrase too then end it with it all goes god with love. Something like.
It all goes good with you, it all goes good with you, it all goes good with you, it all goes good with love. Something that sticks in the listeners head and they can’t stop thinking it.
January 24, 2018
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Sweet little song you have here! If I had to add feedback, I think Verse 2 is more lyrically interesting. Just a lot more going on there. Verse 1 is nice but I think you could set the scene in a shorter time, like 2 lines, and free up some opportunities for more imagery to make the song more unique! Definitely has that modern pop country sound! Good job!
January 29, 2018
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‘It all goes good with love’. Love it. My husband and I did movie downtown Nashville, stopped at a singer songwriter venue and now he’s sleeping sound and I’m writing a song….but ‘it all goes good with love’.
January 23, 2018