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Brandon Barclay gave feedback on All I Will Ever Need
My initial is instead of therapy cup of tea. More pleasant. Then instead of shrinks, sugar or whiskey your strong enough and sweet. My thought behind this, is that therapy is one of things that some people think of as a joke. They think shrinks are crazy, and if they’... Read More
Brandon Barclay gave feedback on Not Knowing
What is the rhythmic pattern here. I’m trying to put an iambic pentameter to the first line of the first verse. Thanks
Brandon Barclay gave feedback on When All Else Fails
I would repeat know it and rollin’ and an background repeat under tone voice of “spinnin’ round.” because it’s spinning, something that makes it sound spinning a little in the background would sound cool. fading away in the background as your singing “so find me on your phone.” The... Read More
Brandon Barclay gave feedback on All I Will Ever Need
Side note, some people don’t think shrinks are crazy or that therapy is a joke. But a cup of tea is just so soothing, much more so than a group therapy session or visiting a shrink.