Joined: August 14, 2017
Linne Likes: 2 Songs
Linne Black gave feedback on How It Ends
Hey Bill, I love the overall feel of your song, and the catchy chorus with the fresh, descriptive lyrics about something we’ve all gone through at one time or another.. What I find myself wishing for is something..anything..about what went wrong. You don’t fall in love... Read More
Linne Black gave feedback on When My Day Comes
Billy, you’ve sure got a knack for the blues! Know what I remembered most about your song? It was : If you see me rustin’ Don’t you grease my chain If you see me rustin’ Don’t you grease my chain Ain’t no oil mama Gonna ease this... Read More
Linne Black gave feedback on In the Shadow of the Son
Hi Myrna, Love you song!! Just two suggestions and they both involve your chorus. I’d like to hear the melody soar in an upward direction when you get to the chorus. Right now, it’s too melodically similar to the verses. Also, I’d like to see you make... Read More
Linne Black gave feedback on Hear That Train
There’s just not much a woman can’t do, and do it well! I love the idea of being an engineer, but don’t love the idea of coming out of my retirement (Neonatal RN) enough to do something like that! But, like yourself, I sure love to write... Read More
Linne Black gave feedback on Make My Daddy Proud
Hey Rick, this is such a touching and loving tribute to your dad. If this song is simply your gift to him and nobody else, then I would it’s just perfect! However, I know that you mostly lean toward writing commercially, so I have a few suggestions for you... Read More