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Robert Lloyd

June 03, 2017

Robert Lloyd gave feedback on Five-String

Let me be the first comment… I like the soundtrack. I feel the vocalist is a bit strained for my ears. A little holding back with a bit smoother and melodic delivery would have been better? But it is still acceptable as a demo. The song is a bit wordy,... Read More

June 03, 2017

Robert Lloyd gave feedback on False Paper Clowns

Barry: I know this was posted previously and I’m glad you posted it again. This seems right our of a Freddie Mercury catalog or any great rock vocalist past, present or future. it would be (to me) more of a live performance song than something I listen to in... Read More

June 03, 2017

Robert Lloyd gave feedback on "WELCOME INTO MY WORLD"

Brent: (and thanks for the feedback) And probably I could not have put the word autism reasonably within the lyrics, of course. As it stands, it becomes (without the listener knowing it is about autism) an acting out story line of a child inviting another to come into his/her... Read More

June 02, 2017

Robert Lloyd gave feedback on "WELCOME INTO MY WORLD"

Thanks Phillip…

June 02, 2017

Robert Lloyd gave feedback on "WELCOME INTO MY WORLD"

Thanks Barry… it was fun doing this soundtrack and getting the eery (splg?) sound from my guitar and workstation effects. The fade out idea would have been a good one maybe stretching a bending chord to silence? I believe this autism is out of control in our world and something... Read More

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