Joined: May 26, 2017
Robert Likes: 19 Songs
Robert Lloyd gave feedback on Music In You
Some more ideas for the second line of the first verse Brent: How about “or a shipwrecked boat” “or a castaway boat” And is “a resting note” a musical note or a written note? Leave it up to the listener.
Robert Lloyd gave feedback on Music In You
Brent: Normally with a half rhyme I have no problem and sometimes they are great. But as Marilyn Bergman said in an interview (she must have been quoting me:-), why have a half rhyme when you can use a full rhyme? And in this case, being the first two... Read More
Robert Lloyd gave feedback on "I LOOOVE THAT WOMAN"
Thanks Graham and Phillip… appreciate your concerns. I still feel that to go further and explain in detail why someone would marry that person would take away the idea and guts of the song.And thanks for taking the time to give me feedback here. It makes me look closer... Read More
Robert Lloyd gave feedback on "I LOOOVE THAT WOMAN"
aha… a pre chorus!!!! now that’s thinking. Thanks for sticking with me and not being offended by me defending my way I did it. Cool brother… and I wish more people would chime in and either confirm your suspicion or tell me I’m not crazy! LOL I’m... Read More
Robert Lloyd gave feedback on "I LOOOVE THAT WOMAN"
Hi Phil… I write and produce at such a pace I cannot go back on a song as I had wrote it and recorded it some years ago. I have to always move forward and just learn from a review for the next time I write. I think on this... Read More