Joined: May 26, 2017
Robert Likes: 19 Songs
Robert Lloyd gave feedback on The Africaan Poet
I have spelled it both with a ‘k’ and without. Sorry you feel you get shot down by me. Let me just say this then… “appreciate you feedback.” <g>
Robert Lloyd gave feedback on My Country Heart Lives in Tennessee (Work in Progress)
I see you have the minor in the verse and then you could do it again starting the chorus???? Something to mix it up differently and unexpectedly. Maybe not. Just mulling it over. Good job.
Robert Lloyd gave feedback on My Country Heart Lives in Tennessee (Work in Progress)
Hello David… First of all David… I can hear you should have put a capo up on the second fret and would have fit your voice perfectly. Though you probably don’t have a pro voice, you have a good voice for a songwriter doing a guitar-vocal. Good job. I... Read More
Robert Lloyd gave feedback on "WITH YOUR WINGS"
Thanks Brent… I always wondered what criticism would be for this song. I actually only have one for myself on this and it is also in the first line as I used the word “take” twice. LOL And it has bothered me and I have substituted other words but nothing... Read More
Robert Lloyd gave feedback on The Africaan Poet
Oops… forgot the ‘r’ in your, and sorry about the ‘that’ and the ‘now’... “Ok Phil, now put your hands up!” LOL