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Robert Lloyd

June 07, 2017

Robert Lloyd gave feedback on The Africaan Poet

Oops… forgot the ‘r’ in your, and sorry about the ‘that’ and the ‘now’... “Ok Phil, now put your hands up!” LOL

June 07, 2017

Robert Lloyd gave feedback on The Africaan Poet

I have spelled it both with a ‘k’ and without. Sorry you feel you get shot down by me. Let me just say this then… “appreciate you feedback.” <g>

June 06, 2017

Robert Lloyd gave feedback on My Country Heart Lives in Tennessee (Work in Progress)

I see you have the minor in the verse and then you could do it again starting the chorus???? Something to mix it up differently and unexpectedly. Maybe not. Just mulling it over. Good job.

June 06, 2017

Robert Lloyd gave feedback on My Country Heart Lives in Tennessee (Work in Progress)

Hello David… First of all David… I can hear you should have put a capo up on the second fret and would have fit your voice perfectly. Though you probably don’t have a pro voice, you have a good voice for a songwriter doing a guitar-vocal. Good job. I... Read More

June 06, 2017

Robert Lloyd gave feedback on "WITH YOUR WINGS"

Thanks Brent… I always wondered what criticism would be for this song. I actually only have one for myself on this and it is also in the first line as I used the word “take” twice. LOL And it has bothered me and I have substituted other words but nothing... Read More

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