Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on Antidote

Love the sound, the feel, the imagery. I think the lyrics are good, but there seems to be a contradiction—is he the poison or the antidote?

Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on Forever Could

First off, I really liked this song. It has a cool Taylor Swift vibe, and I love the singer’s voice. I couldn’t figure out what it was about on first listen, but these are very meaty lyrics, lots of substance, something I personally like. It does take a... Read More

Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on Nothing to Give

Nice melody, nice voice—I’d cut out the verse apologizing for your voice. Overall, very lyrically vague, and I don’t know why you titled it “Nothing to Give” instead of “Flying High Today.” I would like to see more about what is going on in the story. Did... Read More

Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on CHAMPAGNE CHARLIE

Not clear what’s happening here, why they are “speed demons,” and am confused by some of the lines. Sounds good, a little bit of Beatles, but I can’t follow the story.

Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on Rock City Nights (Reworked)

Nice melody, but agree that it’s retro, and am not sure it’s appropriate for a song about rock. The intro made me expect something Springsteen-like. I think the lyrics also need to be more rock-like. Do you remember rock “fondly”? I think the lyrics need something more tangible,... Read More