Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on IF I GO (A LULLABY)

Very pretty, nice guitar work. As a lullaby, I agree with Robert, it’s a keeper.

Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on If Love Were A Machine - Lyric only

Thanks for that great feedback. I, too, was a little concerned that the song might seem too dark and I will take another look at that. I tend to start out with more lyrics and then hone down. In this case, since I’m working with a co-writer, i like... Read More

Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on When You Found Me

Thanks. I’ll let it simmer. I’m not sure about breaking up “I stood my ground,” because it’s a set phrase. The other thing is that in speech, verbal ornamentation tends to be glossed over.

Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on When You Found Me

Thanks for taking the time to listen, Phillip! I was trying to keep the song simple, but maybe it’s too simple. You’re right that “just” is often used as filler. That’s not always a problem, unless you notice it, and you did. I’ll give that some... Read More