Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on The Sweetest

I agree with Amber, and would suggest experimenting with R&B, hip-hop, or something along that line. I think the lyrics would fit right in to those other genres. You throw that in, but maybe the whole song should go in that direction.

Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on Hearts Wide Open

Thanks, Barry! A friend of mine told me it was “Dylanesque,” so maybe you’re on to something. I did record it solo originally, but added the vocals and guitar to give it a little more color. I think it pretty clearly defines itself as a Christian song, though I... Read More

Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on Whatever Will Be

Should have noted your name before I wrote that. Good choice of singer.

Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on Whatever Will Be

The music has a nice feel to it, and I like your voice (assuming your are singing). The lyric seems like a first draft, not clear what/who you are talking about, a lover or God perhaps, and it could benefit by some storytelling, even if it’s condensed. Verse 2... Read More

Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on Hearts Wide Open

Thanks, feedback is always helpful. I’ll give that some thought. It’s the first time anyone’s mentioned a disconnect. The dynamic might be due to my shortcomings as a folk singer and my crusty voice. I’d probably have to collaborate with someone with more musical experience in... Read More