Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Walk in the Rain

I’ll add your overuse of the word “just”, which is used several times in the song.  I know songwriting doesn’t follow the strict rules of proper English, like ending a line with a preposition, but I had an English teacher that would give an automatic “F” if... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Last First Kiss

Beautiful song.  I really like the use of soft rhymes throughout the song… it supports the overall feeling. Great job! Phillip

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Music In You

Hey Brent!  Congrats on the new venture… should be right up your alley. For this song, I found the electric guitar distracting and it took away from the lyrics.  I think it would be better with an acoustic guitar.  The verses seem a little short to me... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Who’s Next

Curious Brent… out of all the songs you’ve written, how many have you done where the chorus changes?

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Believing Is Seeing

I like this one Brent.  Nice message of hope when things are looking down.  I could here several different artists singing this one.  Wish you good luck with it.