Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Made for Shades

Thanks for the input Brent!  I had the same concerns when I first read the lyrics, but since the theme and most of the lyrics came from a woman (Kim), I didn’t think any more about… till now. I guess it can be viewed as a tongue-in-cheek song,... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Indigo

Great descriptive lyrics as usual.  Good imagery.  I could easily follow the lyrics and didn’t feel lost anywhere.

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Troy's Dream

Without seeing the lyrics, its hard to give an in depth opinion.  Sounds pretty well written, and, it just might be the reverb on the vocals, sounds like an early Moody Blues track.

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Lovin' In It

Honestly, I felt kind of lost in the song the first time I listened, like I needed more info.  Read the lyrics closely and it made more sense.  I kept hearing the chorus as “Lovin’ it”, which didn’t match the title.  Reading the lyrics, I feel... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Don't Buy Me a Drink (G. Irwin, S. Molinda, K. Pappas)

George, I’m a nobody from nowhere who’s new at songwriting, but here are a couple of observations… In the chorus, how can I spin you around the room slowly?  I think of spinning around the room as moving pretty fast. Second, after the first chorus, you changed... Read More